News

1. Same-sex couples exist whether schools teach about them or not. - could be a bias opinion... needs attribute

 

2. This raises the question, would universal health care work here, locally? - who's raising the question

 

3. Although SB 5688 has been dubbed the “everything but marriage” bill, many people opposed to it feel that if it is approved by state voters and enacted into law it will eventually pave the way for gay marriage in the state of Washington. - who dubbed the bill, and what constitutes many people

 

4. “Tonight, in an historic vote, the House of Representatives passed a bill that would finally make real the promise of quality, affordable health care for the American people,” President Barack Obama said.

 

5. The ASWSU Senate is taking a stand against initiative 1033 with their newest resolution. - This implies that initiativev 1033 is wrong, creating a writing bias

 

6. TAPOR is largely considered a financial disaster for Colorado and was suspended in 2005. - Who considers it a financial disaster... get rid of uncommon acronyms

 

7. Many local citizens face the tough decision between buying insurance and putting food on the table. - attribution, who is saying it. If these people exist we need to find them.

 

8. President Obama has received significant public attention for his health care bill, and residents of Whitman County are well aware of what his plan means. - same as the one above.

 

9. While the lighting initiative is important, Workman believes that not all the lighting requested may be necessary. - who says its important? Workman

 

10. Though only a few were positive H1N1 cases, the hysteria spread throughout the community and led to the large number of suspected cases. - did it spread through the media? or through the community.